A Poem For You Lightseekers

JohnWdoe · 09-11-2008, 06:43 PM

Play this song well you read! don't peak tell its on :P

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4KTIs...eature=related

Thy grandeur of beauty speakth
Infinite colours are in its one
Ignition my soul flys amongst the stars
If only a word could send a poet
Connected always for time is mere
Soap springs and ancient harps
A thousand minds upon a mountain
Wishing...

Violins echo our warmth and smiles
Carrying us across the pits of fallen
All minds equal singularity
Sharing the bounty of a vessels experience

Across the limelight and blackened stones a vision
Not a test in this conscious
Rivers swirl in symbols
Every etching of love
Carving into the mountain of our wishing

All which is now and forever be seen
Gazing infinite our shackles break
Repeating sky's white as pearl opening
Humble milky height of existence
Our hands become one holding
The breath of harmony united

Unbound cosmos smiles
Warmth surrounds each body
Waters our chariot, its horses glide
Following its journey in which we go
Speechless sights of our mountain
Of which it grows

Blue crystalline into Gold
The trails of all which has been
Without eyes only wishing to be
A journey to the center of all
Energy flows within every given symbol
Time zero/zero infinite, the cherub song
Cosmic webs mend and heal
All which is and all to be
Meridian of violet purifys
Souls as we ascend time
Upon our mountain of wishing it smiles

Gilded without hate we walk
To a tree of golden fruit
The taste anoints and sends our souls
Into ever speaking foreverness
To be at one with humanity
Tears form rivers - each tear infinite
Its ever wellspring of mans emotion

We sit...
On our mountain wellspring wishing...

Cookie · 09-11-2008, 09:22 PM

JohnWdoe... this is so very lovely!

The song gave me chills... It's perfect for this lovely poem.

I write poetry too and always have a song in mind when I write.

Do you record your poetry or make visuals for it?

Thanks for sharing ..

Peace to you and yours... OpenEyes

JohnWdoe · 09-12-2008, 12:46 AM

Thanx for the message OpenEyes! I wrote that for the purpose of getting in the mind of Ascension

i hope you enjoyed it because i wrote it exactly for that :P. I never use visuals but have considered it, would bring out alot.

If you happen to do visuals or anyone on here i give you permission to use this poem, anyone really.

Also, you should share one of your poems if you want! be nice to hear it!

Hope all is well!

TranceAm · 09-12-2008, 01:16 AM

The person in the mirror
Never manages to smile for a longer time.

Whatever you do, whatever you try
When the non conscious comes back in..
Bye bye goes your facial smile.

That ray of pure sunshine.
That touches every mind.
Love on a display.
As best of the gentle side can be.
For everyone that wants it is there to see...

And the ones not smiling thinking..
Curses.. but I do see...

There is... still hope for me.
Someday love will touch my heart.
I will be the happy one...
For everyone to see..

There is a person... that smiles as a mirror.
The man handed the key to love..
Did he tell you the secret?
or he was he in vain when he tried.

Cookie · 09-12-2008, 01:17 AM

Hiya, John..

I have created many videos for my spoken poems... Adding audio and visuals to ones poems intensifies the impact greatly, I believe. And they can be quite beautiful.... I can give you some pointers if you're interested.

I want to thank you for posting this poem... you gave me courage to post one of mine! lol! It's call 'Twilight in you Wooded Temple'..
I hope you enjoy.

Peace!

Zynox · 09-12-2008, 01:24 AM

Awesome expressions folks. I suspect many here write and release. I started a group for this at:

http://www.projectavalon.net/forum/group.php?groupid=16

Namaste!

conjuredUp · 09-12-2008, 03:46 AM

Well... I may not have known you before I wrote my post about love, but I surely know you now.

And yep.
It's official.

I LOVE YOU.

I felt it in my bones.

LOVELOVELOVE,
C

Antaletriangle · 09-13-2008, 01:41 AM

Great,enigmatic stuff johnwdoe thanks.Have you seen the film clled the fountain by Darren aronofsky?I think you'd like it.

JohnWdoe · 09-14-2008, 03:00 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by TranceAm

The person in the mirror
Never manages to smile for a longer time.

Whatever you do, whatever you try
When the non conscious comes back in..
Bye bye goes your facial smile.

That ray of pure sunshine.
That touches every mind.
Love on a display.
As best of the gentle side can be.
For everyone that wants it is there to see...

And the ones not smiling thinking..
Curses.. but I do see...

There is... still hope for me.
Someday love will touch my heart.
I will be the happy one...
For everyone to see..

There is a person... that smiles as a mirror.
The man handed the key to love..
Did he tell you the secret?
or he was he in vain when he tried.

Love the ending and the message!! very good! i love the introspection aspect and the question at the end it really ties the message together.

If anyone else wants to share a poem don't be shy

we all can appreciate a persons work.

Hope you all are doing great!

Peace my friends!

JohnWdoe · 09-14-2008, 03:04 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Antaletriangle

Great,enigmatic stuff johnwdoe thanks.Have you seen the film clled the fountain by Darren aronofsky?I think you'd like it.

Never heard

but i marked it on my list of "stuff to look into" im actually looking into some more spiritual/philosophical films, seems alot of good plotted movies came out in the 70's and 80's (before the hole rating system!) so i keep finding myself tied to great films of that day! I will check out The Fountain and thanks for the tip

Have a good one!

JohnWdoe · 09-14-2008, 03:09 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by conjuredUp

Well... I may not have known you before I wrote my post about love, but I surely know you now.

And yep.
It's official.

I LOVE YOU.

I felt it in my bones.

LOVELOVELOVE,
C

You know what? without you even knowing you helped me get over a "bump" i had in some love/light concepts. You know why? because if we knew each other i could honestly see you helping me and showing me the utmost respect and good vibes. Sometimes i let the concepts of mindsets over shadow the good deeds humanity does within a system or belief and for that im sorry!

What i hope for you is to find the best people to express yourself to without being used, some people see someone with caring eyes and see a sucker sadly... That in itself is one of the most cynical ignorant things - when a man can obviously see someone cares but still uses it against the person for ones own non-assisting selfish deed. In the end it helps no one!

So my friend thank you for the kind words because i understand... I hope you are doing well

Have a good day

09-11-2008, 06:43 PM	#1
JohnWdoe Avalon Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 191	A Poem For You Lightseekers Play this song well you read! don't peak tell its on :P http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4KTIs...eature=related Thy grandeur of beauty speakth Infinite colours are in its one Ignition my soul flys amongst the stars If only a word could send a poet Connected always for time is mere Soap springs and ancient harps A thousand minds upon a mountain Wishing... Violins echo our warmth and smiles Carrying us across the pits of fallen All minds equal singularity Sharing the bounty of a vessels experience Across the limelight and blackened stones a vision Not a test in this conscious Rivers swirl in symbols Every etching of love Carving into the mountain of our wishing All which is now and forever be seen Gazing infinite our shackles break Repeating sky's white as pearl opening Humble milky height of existence Our hands become one holding The breath of harmony united Unbound cosmos smiles Warmth surrounds each body Waters our chariot, its horses glide Following its journey in which we go Speechless sights of our mountain Of which it grows Blue crystalline into Gold The trails of all which has been Without eyes only wishing to be A journey to the center of all Energy flows within every given symbol Time zero/zero infinite, the cherub song Cosmic webs mend and heal All which is and all to be Meridian of violet purifys Souls as we ascend time Upon our mountain of wishing it smiles Gilded without hate we walk To a tree of golden fruit The taste anoints and sends our souls Into ever speaking foreverness To be at one with humanity Tears form rivers - each tear infinite Its ever wellspring of mans emotion We sit... On our mountain wellspring wishing...

09-11-2008, 09:22 PM	#2
Cookie Avalon Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: USA Posts: 141	Re: A Poem For You Lightseekers JohnWdoe... this is so very lovely! The song gave me chills... It's perfect for this lovely poem. I write poetry too and always have a song in mind when I write. Do you record your poetry or make visuals for it? Thanks for sharing .. Peace to you and yours... OpenEyes

09-12-2008, 12:46 AM	#3
JohnWdoe Avalon Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2008 Posts: 191	Re: A Poem For You Lightseekers Thanx for the message OpenEyes! I wrote that for the purpose of getting in the mind of Ascension i hope you enjoyed it because i wrote it exactly for that :P. I never use visuals but have considered it, would bring out alot. If you happen to do visuals or anyone on here i give you permission to use this poem, anyone really. Also, you should share one of your poems if you want! be nice to hear it! Hope all is well!

09-12-2008, 01:16 AM	#4
TranceAm Avalon Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: South Carolina USA Posts: 368	Re: A Poem For You Lightseekers The person in the mirror Never manages to smile for a longer time. Whatever you do, whatever you try When the non conscious comes back in.. Bye bye goes your facial smile. That ray of pure sunshine. That touches every mind. Love on a display. As best of the gentle side can be. For everyone that wants it is there to see... And the ones not smiling thinking.. Curses.. but I do see... There is... still hope for me. Someday love will touch my heart. I will be the happy one... For everyone to see.. There is a person... that smiles as a mirror. The man handed the key to love.. Did he tell you the secret? or he was he in vain when he tried.

09-12-2008, 01:17 AM	#5
Cookie Avalon Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: USA Posts: 141	Re: A Poem For You Lightseekers Hiya, John.. I have created many videos for my spoken poems... Adding audio and visuals to ones poems intensifies the impact greatly, I believe. And they can be quite beautiful.... I can give you some pointers if you're interested. I want to thank you for posting this poem... you gave me courage to post one of mine! lol! It's call 'Twilight in you Wooded Temple'.. I hope you enjoy. Peace!

09-12-2008, 01:24 AM	#6
Zynox Avalon Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Ann Arbor, Michigan Posts: 243	Re: A Poem For You Lightseekers Awesome expressions folks. I suspect many here write and release. I started a group for this at: http://www.projectavalon.net/forum/group.php?groupid=16 Namaste!

09-12-2008, 03:46 AM	#7
conjuredUp Avalon Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: beyond the sun... Posts: 253	Re: A Poem For You Lightseekers Well... I may not have known you before I wrote my post about love, but I surely know you now. And yep. It's official. I LOVE YOU. I felt it in my bones. LOVELOVELOVE, C

09-13-2008, 01:41 AM	#8
Antaletriangle Avalon Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: U.K. Posts: 3,380	Re: A Poem For You Lightseekers Great,enigmatic stuff johnwdoe thanks.Have you seen the film clled the fountain by Darren aronofsky?I think you'd like it.